lunes, 11 de mayo de 2009

My english competence in 2009

I'm doing English now for many years and now it's the time to see the best work done on Batxillerat. This is what I consider to be, my best oral presentation, together with my school mate Chanez Selloum. Since it's our last year on school before University we decided to talk about Universities in England, the most recognized and reputated all over the world.
The best written evidence i'v got are a dialogue and news comment about President Obama. This to written documents reflect the maturity and the interest for global confrontations or problems, something everyone should be interested for, yet it effects everyone.
I think it makes my best work because it reflects the vocabulary used such as perhaps some specific words learned during the reading of news and books in English. Just as said before it also shows the maturity of the writer and an interest for the world.
The oral presentation but shows how fluent I am and what I am able to do. I think the way we express is very natural and pretty easy, without being afraid to speak in a different language which is not mine. It also shows what we have learned and a interest for overseas.


Best Oral Presentation



Best dialogue

ISRAEL vs. PALESTINA

tv host: Hello everybody !!!! :):):)
In Middle East there are problems, and one of the most importants is the war between Israel and Paslestina. Today, here, tere is an israelian who will explain us what happen and how she defend her religion and her land. Hello Sarah!
Sarah: Hello Tim! Yes, it's true, we have a lot of problems but I think we are right. All our lives we had been discriminated and mistreated. Hitler and nazis began a genocide and the survivors had no place to go. I don't think that Israel has the militar power to kick the palestinans out of our land.
Tim: Ok. This is an israelians opinion about this issue. Now, we'll gonna hear a palestinian one!
Shiva: Hello Tim! Yes that's true, but we have the same problems that they have. Genocide is alsi familiar for us. Anyway, I undestand that you are angry that we are in Jerusalem too. But for both it represents our country, our promissed land and religious influences both sides. Both see Jerusalem like a holy place and everyone wants to defend what's for them . But I am sure that there us an alternative to resche the conflict.
Sarah: I agree with you that there's an alternative. But I think that Jewish people don't have any other place to go. We went to Europe and they killed all that they could. And because of that we decided to return to our promissed land and now palestinians wants to kich us out. And they have a lot of islamic countries to go, whereas we can't leave elsewhere.
Shiva: Yes that's true, but we were raced. We were born here it's also ower home!
Sarah: I do eather. But you also have to understand us. Yet you believe in the Coran so do we in the Torah. And it says that Yahvé promissed us a land and that was Jerusalem, and it still is.
Shiva: But Mahoma, when he ran away from Mecca he also talked about this our Jerusalem. Mecca is a place where we go for devotion, but Jerusalem is our home, a holy place for us eather.
Sarah: I know what you mean, of course. And you say it now, you have two or more holy places to go and we only have Jerusalem:our place and the one of our ancestores.
Shiva: But being your holy country and our's too. Don't you think it's possbile to live together in peace there? Respecting each other beliefs. In the end, Torah, Coran and Bible talk and predicts about respecting each other.
Sarah: I think that we can't live together in the same place. This isn't the solution for the problem. But I'm sure that we can find a solution but it will be really difficult because we are fighting for our believe, and the religious fights are very difficult to resolve.
Tim: And now the time is over. That was a really

Best written evidence

News 2. Obamas first 100 days!


It's an overview of President Obama's first 100 days in the white house
As everyone knows, the president made huge promises and had to inherit two wars and an economic chaos. What did happend the first days of his presidency.
It's view of innovation in economy, healt care, energy, military process diplomacy and domestic security.
In economy the Obama Administration is helping home ownersand struggeling with various aspects of the economical crisis. They act with economic stimulus such as tax cuts, helping with money from the government. They developed rescue plans for the banks, refinancing mortage plans and house saving plans. We'll see how this continues.
Health care: about 64 milion americans have no health insurance and those who have pay a lot. The administration is acting already and as we saw the last days Obama alows now stemm cell investigations, kids have a health insurance and insuirances costs and grug costs are ment to be
The military conflicts are of course very important now a days. The Obama administration has to face with problems from the past such as Israel for exemple. But first of all the Obama Administration wants to withdraw the troops form Iraq. As well the conflicts in Afghanistan must be resolt in the next year and thats what the administration is focused on: a war against terrorism. There are pilicies and actions planned for Iraq and Afghanistan.
The new administration is doing it's best to move forward and change the american lifes.
We'll see what will happen the next weeks and how not just the USA but the whole world may change

1 comentario:

KST TEACHERS dijo...

Thank you for your collaboration, you've been working a lot and I'm sure you'll be rewarded !!

It was not necessary to copy all the writing evidence again or the video, the link of the post is enough. If tyou like you can change it.

Good luck!!